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If I called you a donut
A chocolate-covered, deep-fried, jelly-filled,
sour-creamy, star-shaped, powdered sugar donut,
Would you look at me strangely?

If I said your ears were funny
And they looked like that actor's, from the show you always watch
And your hair looked like a battle helmet when it was wet
Would you still stay to listen?

If I threw you a soggy sponge ball
Full of water, and it hit you in the nose
And made you inhale the pool
Would you throw it at me?

Or would you call me a donut
A chocolate-covered, deep-fried, jelly-filled,
sour-creamy, star-shaped, powdered sugar donut,
With whipped cream and hot fudge sauce?
:iconbrightbluewindwitch:
From a conversation I had with my little brother at the pool.

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:iconnorishi:
~Norishi Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
owo interesting..
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~awesomedarkdragon Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
now im hungry........
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~BrightBlueWindWitch Jun 21, 2012  Student General Artist
:D Oops, sorry!
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~awesomedarkdragon Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol, thats alright! nice poem though, i like it!
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